ext_31510 ([identity profile] mrlogic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] autographedcat 2004-03-09 11:41 am (UTC)

Hee! I'm glad [livejournal.com profile] cflute made me read Mirror Dance, so that I'm able to appreciate this.

It seems to scan just fine to me (with a few epentheses here and there), although the "Miles Naismith! (Miles Naismith!)" in the break would be awfully hard to spit out at speed in the same rhythm as "Istanbul! (Istanbul!)"
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